Wednesday 13 April 2016

WALT: Follow the writing process to write an exposition.

WALT: Follow the writing process to write an exposition.
For my writing I'm doing Richie Mccaw and Sir Edmund Hillary.
Here is my conclusion


Personally, I think Sir Edmund Hillary is a better leader because he has helped people and had devoted most of his life to helping them. He has used all leadership traits by helping Nepal have a better life and taking pride in all of his achievements. Also he never gave up and ended up building  36 different things in 40 years.  He had helped so many people in his lifetime and made them thankful for all the things that he had done. These are the reason why I think that he is an amazing leader.

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